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Daralia « Thread Started on Oct 5, 2007, 12:27pm »
Charisma "Daralia" Endimyon
Near to midnight, Charisma sits at the bar, having her second break drink. She's looked at the clock about 3 times in the last five minutes. She can't wait to get out of work. Tonight seems to be lagging. Tired of the old drunkards that have been trying to get her attention for the last ten minutes. They're hoping that they'll get a "private show". Frustration shows in her brow more by each calling of Daralia. All she can here, "Daralia! Daralia!", until she finally realizes that this new voice is not of those drunken old fools, but of her boss. She looks up dazed and confused. "Hey doll, are you alright? You seemed so distracted during your last number," he said. "You've nothing to worry about," Charisma replied. "But I can't help but feel..." She cuts him off "Dorien! I said I'm fine!" "Sorry to be concerned..." he says, feeling completely shot down. "I'm just exhausted, I haven't been sleeping very well, I need some space I'll be fine. Thank you," she replied with a false smile to ease his disappointed expression. She rises from her seat at the bar, gives Dorien a friendly kiss on the cheek, and continues slowly to the changing room.
Joined: Feb 2007 Gender: Female Posts: 147 Location: Syracuse, NY
Re: Daralia « Reply #1 on Oct 5, 2007, 3:05pm »
(OOC: Lovely first post, just a few tiny problems:
--All of the in character (IC) posting is done in the same thread, so you can just copy and paste this into Chapter 1 and delete this.
--Uh, the premise sort of has the place run by non-character (NC) Russian Maffia types, so what you had is good but essentially, but they wouldn't really be interested in her well-being, as long as she was still making them money. Mayhaps you can tweek it slightly?
Sorry to bug you, first post and all, just want to make sure everybody is in sync. You know, all four of us. lmao)
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